“Common
Sense,” Thomas Paine, January 1776.
1.
What was the author arguing?
The author, Thomas Paine was arguing about the separation of America and
Great Britain. The purpose of Thomas Paine writing “Common Sense” was to push
the debate of complete independence. The text points out the faults of the
British Monarchy and reasons why America should be completely independent from
Great Britain. Paine argued that Great Britain’s motives were interest not attachment
that “America would have flourished as
much, and probably much more, had no European power had any thing to do with
her.” Paine goes on to talk of Great Britain and how people cannot make
laws without the consent of the king. He also mentions Great Britain’s
authority in America by stating, “The
authority of Great-Britain over this continent, is a form of government, which
sooner or later must have an end.” Paine continues by stressing the idea of
districts between colonies. That each district is to send a certain number of
delegates to Congress, where they will sit and choose a president, where there
will only be one. Even if it meant war, Thomas Paine was determined to get his
point across. You can picture this “Common Sense” article as a persuasion.
Thomas Paine thought that nothing but independence could keep and preserve the
peace of America.
2.
How does the author appeal to logos, pathos, and ethos with their argument?
The authors appeal to logos within the argument is
quite clear. The author’s logo’s was to persuade his audience that America
needed to be totally separated from Great Britain. Paine communicated that
America was not benefiting from Great Britain at all; basically that America
could do better without them. The appeal to pathos is very strong. Thomas Paine
was very precise with his examples of the British monarchy and really showed
his emotional side and protection of America. I though his emotions were at
best when he stated “I am not induced by
motives of pride, party, or resentment to espouse the doctrine of separation
and independence; I am clearly, positively, and conscientiously persuaded that
it is the true interest of this continent to be so.” I felt as if I could
feel Thomas Paine speaking while I read the text. Thomas Paine’s appeal to
ethos backed up his argument. Paine’s character in the text was an educated
man, a man that has thought long and hard of what is going on in his country.
Paine was a man that truly wanted to make a difference in America and was not
afraid of war if it came down to it.
3.
What is the historical significance/relevance of this document?
The article “Common Sense” played a huge
factor of pressure for independence in 1776. The pamphlet in which the article
was published sold over 150,000 copies. People from all over America were
reading the work of Thomas Paine. It was acts like these of Thomas Paine’s
“Common Sense” and Patrick Henry’s “Give me liberty of give me death” that
truly made a mark in American history. Patriotic men that fought for what was
right, and did not fear war as a result.
4.
Do you find the author’s argument convincing? Why of why not?
I definitely found Thomas Paine’s
argument convincing. The power and emotion that was put into the article speaks
for itself. I found it brilliant that Paine wrote “Common Sense” and actually
published it. Especially at a time where not everyone thought about independence,
where colonists still believed in the “Mother Lands” way of ruling, because
that all they knew. I found Paine’s actions to be brave and convincing.
Super job on this analysis! Paine took great effort to develop his message of "simple facts, plain arguments, and common sense" so that it would appeal to the broadest audience possible. Many colonists remained loyal to Great Britain, still others straddled the fence, and even many of those leaning toward separation weren't sure exactly how far they were willing to go. Paine needed to convince all of these colonists that they must strive for nothing less than independence from Great Britain. I thought the logos and pathos of this document were beautifully intertwined; Paine's arguments were logical and filled with just the right amount of emotion. While this document lacks much of the fiery language of other documents of its time, Paine's work relies primarily on points of "common sense" to unite the people of the colonies behind the quest for independence from England. Paine was quick to point out that things had changed dramatically since the "commencement of hostilities;" the government of England could no longer be trusted to uphold the interests of its citizens living in the colonies. Additionally, he clearly demonstrates that any protection England offered the colonies served, above all, to protect the interests of England. This document was a plank in the foundation of the democracy of the United States. Paine argues eloquently that representative government just makes more "sense" than a monarchy ruled by a king with no qualifications other than "birthright." Nice work, Jaime.
ReplyDeleteI had thought this week TA was very interesting for me to read and the reason behind that was due to the fact that I was always interested in finding out on how American I had gotten their independents from Great Britain. Something I had agreed with you was on the part that you had said “Paine goes on to talk of Great Britain and how people cannot make laws without the consent of the king”, I had thought that was simpler as to having an a president, in other words what I am referring to is that a bail or a law cannot be passed unless the president himself approves of it. In Great Britain a person cannot do anything without the consent of the king, even though America and Britain are very simple rates, America still wanted to get away from Britain due to their lack of not given the people independents and their rights, and when they had discovered that they no longer need to relied on the Britain because they had the land and the money to support themselves they had decided to pick a fight with them and gain their own Independents, over all I had liked your work and agreed with every claim that you had pointed or stated, great job.
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Nasra Muhidin
Wonderful analysis. So many people remained loyal to Great Britian in spite of the termoil that they were in and the way they were treated. They needed to have it pointed out to them the issues that they had to deal with were a result of their continued aligance to the "Mother Country." I personally find it amazing that people would continue to in essince be abused by Great Britian and most just went with it. Its interesting that people had to have it spelled out to them the negative treatment and that it had to end. I love the way that Thomas Paine spelled it out in great detail the treatment, how to seperate ourselves and create a government under one man. He also was honest in spelling out that this was not going to be easy and that it was a battle. Deanna Holen
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this weeks TA. I like the way you put that Thomas Paine was determined to gain the attention of people. Its true people were still very loyal to Britian and with his thoughts and ideas he could sway people. I also like the fact that you put his pain and emotion in his put in his speech because he felt very strongly about what he beleived in.
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your TA, very detailed and ordered when you explained the reading. You did a very good job of pointing out the mind set of Thomas Paine when writing "Common Sense". It interesting to read that letter and the laymen terms that were used to express that American no longer wanted to be Britain runner boys. It was a start of how media would play a vast roll in warning of state emergencies or when a citizen are treated wrong by a well known company, the media was used as mean to display this idea of Independence through mass market. It was great way to get the people stirred up for independence because reading caused the mind to go into visualizing mode as every word is processed in the thought, so in the minds of the readers they can picture life without answering to the king. They can see and taste this freedom that Thomas Paine is writing about.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your Text Analysis Thomas Paine and the "Common Sense." Thomas Paine was trying to inform the people about the absurdities of the British monarchy. Paine was trying to become an advocate for the people only if they would listen to what he had to say. His logos, pathos, and ethos where right on point Paine wanted the people to change and speak up for themselves. Overall Thomas Paine Common Sense TA was very informative and help he to look at what Thomas Paine was trying to do for the people. he was trying to get them out of a democracy state of mind. He stood up for the people or at lease tried to.
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